Writing a letter to an estate agent abroad

IELTS Letter 1

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You and your family are moving to another country and you are looking for a rented accommodation there.

Write a letter to a property  agent. In your letter…

  • Introduce yourself and family
  • Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
  • Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

Write at least 150 words.

Begin your letter as follows

Dear Sir or Madam,

Answer:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Saurbah Tiwari, an IT professional from Pune, India. I am writing this letter to enquire for rented accommodation in the city of Sydney for my family of 5 members.

My wife, too, works for an IT firm, and will continue to work for the same company in Sydney. We have a daughter who is six years old and she is looking forward to join primary school over there. Also, my parents stay with me who are retired, but fit enough.

Looking at our family, a three-bedroom apartment is preferable. I expect a well-equipped kitchen as my wife is an excellent chef and likes to give a try to variety of cuisines on weekends. Additionally, at least one reserved car park is essential as my company is offering me a car.

As far as transportation of other family members is concerned, we will be very happy to have nearby metro station and market since my wife can travel without hassle. Keeping my young one and parents in mind an accommodation in quiet suburban area nearby a primary school will be a great idea, because we need not worry about their safety.

In the context, may I request you to search for suitable accommodation? I would appreciate an early response. Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely,

Saurabh Tiwari

Score = 8.5 bands

The letter satisfies all the instructions of the task as well as perfectly conveys the formal tone. It has almost perfect flow of ideas making it very easy to read and follow. Enough number of linking devices are used overall. Word used show the richness of the language as they are used very precisely. Although the grammatical range and accuracy is perfect, there is a slight possibility of writing even more efficient sentences.

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