IELTS Essay 12

Many professionals from India appear for IELTS – General Training each year in order to apply for permanent residency in Canada and Australia. Students appear for Academic module. Task 1 is Letter Writing and Task 2 is Essay Writing.

Essay writing expects you to write a letter in minimum 250 words. Reader judges your essay on factors such as Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resources, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Here, we have decided to publish samples by our students which can guide students preparing for IELTS online.

In some countries, children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Write at least 250 words.

Include valid reasons and relevant examples from your knowledge and experience to back your position.

Answer:

Children are the future of the society. Well nurtured and well-behaved children turn into useful adults who ultimately contribute to a healthy community. Now, some countries set very strict rules for children while others provide unnecessary flexibility. In my opinion, children’s upbringing must be balanced which means they must be encouraged to see dreams and chase them along while respecting the rules of loving elders.

To begin, if children are grown in very strict environment, curiosity for the restricted aspects of life rises. This may deviate them from their goals and prompt them to take extreme measures acting on impulse. It is no coincidence that most of the people find and taste alcohol in teenage along with their friends.

Similarly, if children are never questioned and they are allowed to behave as per whim they may get exposed to disturbing information for their age. This may lead them to take wrong actions as their conscience is not developed. For illustration, teenage pregnancy is one of the tormenting experiences on the rise nowadays as the liberal youth is enlightened only in bits and parts.

However, the concerned parents who understand the problems of their children can educate kids to develop sense of right and wrong by providing guidelines rather than rigid rules of behaviour. With such successful attempt children can explore unknown aspects on their own, by scaling every aspect on the guiding principle given by their parents.

In the end, extremes of freedom as well as restrictions turn out to be destructive for our future generations as they may either rebel against the society or they may never develop the conscience. Rather, a balanced approach where the young generation acts freely based on guidelines laid by elders is advocated.

The student received 8 bands in her actual IELTS examination.

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